https://www.msn.com/en-us/sports/nfl/texans-jj-watt-throws-out-first-pitch-while-on-crutches/ar-AAu90BC
A good thing this article did was include a video of the footage of JJ Watts in crutches throwing his first pitch sine being on crutches. The pictures the article used were really good and showed Watts pitching while on crutches. The video did good in informing the audience of the situation and they saw the reaction of Watts as he pitched.
Things the article did not do good in was making the actual article less informative. They had only a couple short paragraphs while they could have added more to the information in order to keep the audience interested in the story. The article could've also done better in putting more information of what event went down in order for Watts to get himself crutches.
If I were to write this article I would include a video just like the article did but I would also include more background information of what occurred to Watts in order for him to get crutches. I would include pictures of the event also. I would try my best to make the article more longer at least a good more than a couple paragraphs. This week I wasn't really in class as I was sick and so I wasn't in class for the majority of this week. A way I collaborated however was that I decided to help in production for Raven Roundup and that for me is an accomplishment because I helped produce for the first time this year in the studio.
Friday, October 27, 2017
Monday, October 16, 2017
Packers not not planing on getting new QB after Aaron Rogers injury
https://www.cbssports.com/nfl/news/packers-dont-plan-on-adding-colin-kaepernick-after-aaron-rodgers-injury/
The article did a good job in evaluating why the Packer's coach, Mike McCarthy, did not go ahead and try to sign a new QB to replace Aaron Rogers after his injury against the Vikings. The article included an interview with McCarthy, in which he stated that he "had trust" and "is more than happy to move forward with the quarterbacks he has on roster." The article did good in including that McCarthy put his trust in his backup Brett Hundley for the rest of the season. The article also did good in including an interview from Hundley and on how he feels about the change. The article wasn't done with interviews as they did a great job of including an opinion of another Packer's player and give his insight of what Hundley brought to the game plan.
Although the article did a very good job in including the important information, they could've done a bit better. The article could've done better in including pictures of Roger's injury. They could've also included Roger's input of how he feels in not being able to play the rest of the season and how he feels in Hundley taking over his position.
If I were to write an article over this topic, I would've included pictures over the people being interviewed so that way people who don't know any of the players will be given an image of them. I would've included NFL sport commentators interviews as well to see what they thought of McCarthy's decision of putting Hundley as QB instead of just signing someone else for Roger's position. Other than that, the article did a good job in including the important information for a reader. This week I collaborated in working with broadcast. I went to ODAC with the rest of the class and I did better in setting up the equipment. When the game was over, I helped out in collecting the equipment to send it over back to the school. That is how I collaborated for this week.
The article did a good job in evaluating why the Packer's coach, Mike McCarthy, did not go ahead and try to sign a new QB to replace Aaron Rogers after his injury against the Vikings. The article included an interview with McCarthy, in which he stated that he "had trust" and "is more than happy to move forward with the quarterbacks he has on roster." The article did good in including that McCarthy put his trust in his backup Brett Hundley for the rest of the season. The article also did good in including an interview from Hundley and on how he feels about the change. The article wasn't done with interviews as they did a great job of including an opinion of another Packer's player and give his insight of what Hundley brought to the game plan.
Although the article did a very good job in including the important information, they could've done a bit better. The article could've done better in including pictures of Roger's injury. They could've also included Roger's input of how he feels in not being able to play the rest of the season and how he feels in Hundley taking over his position.
If I were to write an article over this topic, I would've included pictures over the people being interviewed so that way people who don't know any of the players will be given an image of them. I would've included NFL sport commentators interviews as well to see what they thought of McCarthy's decision of putting Hundley as QB instead of just signing someone else for Roger's position. Other than that, the article did a good job in including the important information for a reader. This week I collaborated in working with broadcast. I went to ODAC with the rest of the class and I did better in setting up the equipment. When the game was over, I helped out in collecting the equipment to send it over back to the school. That is how I collaborated for this week.
Friday, October 6, 2017
Dannon Cuts ties with Cam Newton
https://www.usatoday.com/story/sports/nfl/panthers/2017/10/05/dannon-cut-ties-panthers-quarterback-cam-newton/735648001/
The article did a good job in explaining why Dannon cut ties with Carolina Panther's quarterback Cam Newton. They explained that they cut ties with him because of his sexist comment towards Jourdan Rodrigue. He laughed and said during the interview that "it was funny seeing a female talk routes." Dannon has no tolerance with this kind of behavior and were shocked to hear the comment. The article did a good job in also talking to other companies that are sponsoring Newton and put in the fact that those other companies, except one of them, were quick to declare that they wont tolerate this kind of behavior as they support women in sports on and off field.
The article was short but covered everything they needed to. The article even made sure to include the interview where Newton made the sexist comment. One thing I would say they should include is the coaches views on what Newton had said. I would also include another interview in how Newton feels after he made the sexist comment and on the criticism he is receiving. Other than that, the article got all important points and was very strong.
If I were to make this article I would definitely put what this article had. Each interview and as well add videos. However, to make it a stronger article, I would also add an interview on Newton's coaches point of view and how they feel about his comments and all the backlash the quarterback received. That is how I would make the article stronger. This week I was a leader as I helped with working on broadcast. I helped set up for the football and I stayed after the game to pick up all the equipment and bring it back to the school. I made sure to bring as much equipment into the car and carried as much equipment as I could since there was only a few of us.
The article did a good job in explaining why Dannon cut ties with Carolina Panther's quarterback Cam Newton. They explained that they cut ties with him because of his sexist comment towards Jourdan Rodrigue. He laughed and said during the interview that "it was funny seeing a female talk routes." Dannon has no tolerance with this kind of behavior and were shocked to hear the comment. The article did a good job in also talking to other companies that are sponsoring Newton and put in the fact that those other companies, except one of them, were quick to declare that they wont tolerate this kind of behavior as they support women in sports on and off field.
The article was short but covered everything they needed to. The article even made sure to include the interview where Newton made the sexist comment. One thing I would say they should include is the coaches views on what Newton had said. I would also include another interview in how Newton feels after he made the sexist comment and on the criticism he is receiving. Other than that, the article got all important points and was very strong.
If I were to make this article I would definitely put what this article had. Each interview and as well add videos. However, to make it a stronger article, I would also add an interview on Newton's coaches point of view and how they feel about his comments and all the backlash the quarterback received. That is how I would make the article stronger. This week I was a leader as I helped with working on broadcast. I helped set up for the football and I stayed after the game to pick up all the equipment and bring it back to the school. I made sure to bring as much equipment into the car and carried as much equipment as I could since there was only a few of us.
Friday, September 29, 2017
Davante Adams Sports Story
http://profootballtalk.nbcsports.com/2017/09/28/davante-adams-leaves-on-stretcher-after-brutal-crown-of-the-helmet-hit/?cid=eref:nbcnews:text
The article did a good job on explain on what happened to Davante Adams as he was brutally tackled to the ground by the Bears linebacker Danny Trevathan. They included that the tackle knocked him out and caused his mouthpiece to fly out his mouth. The article also did a good job in including that Trevathan had not been ejected, and got a response from former vice president of officiating in the NFL, Mike Pereira, and he concluded that he would've ejected Trevathan.
What the article could've done better was included pictures of the play when Adams got tackled so that way the viewers could also see the helmet on the ground as well as the shot of the mouthpiece flying out of Adams mouth. The article could've done better on getting a report of the Packers coach and asked for his opinion on the matter. Other than that the article was short, thought it was informative on the matter of the tackle.
If I were to write an article over this matter I would've included what others thought of the play and would've questioned the other players to see if they thought Trevathan should've been ejected. I also would've included what the article had put in and asked the Mike Pereira on his thoughts over the situation. To make my article stronger, I would've included pictures of the tackle with shots from the mouthpiece flying out from the helmet on the ground to Adams being carried off on the stretcher. Other than that, that is what I would've included on my article to make it more professional and stronger. This week I edited the football on homecoming week and was able to collaborate with Ryan as he helped me write the shot sheet. The collaboration really helped me learn a few more football terms as well as what to include on the shot sheets like thoroughly explain a play.
The article did a good job on explain on what happened to Davante Adams as he was brutally tackled to the ground by the Bears linebacker Danny Trevathan. They included that the tackle knocked him out and caused his mouthpiece to fly out his mouth. The article also did a good job in including that Trevathan had not been ejected, and got a response from former vice president of officiating in the NFL, Mike Pereira, and he concluded that he would've ejected Trevathan.
What the article could've done better was included pictures of the play when Adams got tackled so that way the viewers could also see the helmet on the ground as well as the shot of the mouthpiece flying out of Adams mouth. The article could've done better on getting a report of the Packers coach and asked for his opinion on the matter. Other than that the article was short, thought it was informative on the matter of the tackle.
If I were to write an article over this matter I would've included what others thought of the play and would've questioned the other players to see if they thought Trevathan should've been ejected. I also would've included what the article had put in and asked the Mike Pereira on his thoughts over the situation. To make my article stronger, I would've included pictures of the tackle with shots from the mouthpiece flying out from the helmet on the ground to Adams being carried off on the stretcher. Other than that, that is what I would've included on my article to make it more professional and stronger. This week I edited the football on homecoming week and was able to collaborate with Ryan as he helped me write the shot sheet. The collaboration really helped me learn a few more football terms as well as what to include on the shot sheets like thoroughly explain a play.
Friday, September 22, 2017
Back Injury to Sideline Tight End Tyler Eifert
http://www.espn.com/nfl/story/_/id/20785019/back-injury-sideline-cincinnati-bengals-te-tyler-eifert-sunday-game-green-bay-packers
The article did a good job on elaborating why Tyler Eifert didn't play last Thursday and missed a full week of practice because of his back injury. This means they kept up to date with the player's absence. The article also did a good job on informing how many back injuries Eifert has had in the pass and included on why he has missed many games due to his injuries. Eifert has never completed a full season since signing with the Bengals back in 2013 due to ankle/back injuries.
What the article could've done better is that they didn't include Eifert's condition at the moment. It would've been better to get an interview with the coach and if possibly Effort himself. The article was kept short with an informative tone but should've added emotion on whether or not fans were devastated with his absence. The article could've also added pictures of Eifert getting hurt and pictures of him getting hurt in the past.
If I were to do and article over the topic, I would've included pictures of Eifert's past injuries as well as the recent one he has from Last Thursday. I would also include an interview with the coach and ask about his feelings of whether or not Eifert was a very valuable player since he has yet to finish a complete season. I would also include exactly how many injuries he has had in the past.
This week I didn't have any editing to do since the last game was an away game. However, I did help Nicole and Rosie with the script to the best of my ability as well as find highlights for the SMN preview clip.
The article did a good job on elaborating why Tyler Eifert didn't play last Thursday and missed a full week of practice because of his back injury. This means they kept up to date with the player's absence. The article also did a good job on informing how many back injuries Eifert has had in the pass and included on why he has missed many games due to his injuries. Eifert has never completed a full season since signing with the Bengals back in 2013 due to ankle/back injuries.
What the article could've done better is that they didn't include Eifert's condition at the moment. It would've been better to get an interview with the coach and if possibly Effort himself. The article was kept short with an informative tone but should've added emotion on whether or not fans were devastated with his absence. The article could've also added pictures of Eifert getting hurt and pictures of him getting hurt in the past.
If I were to do and article over the topic, I would've included pictures of Eifert's past injuries as well as the recent one he has from Last Thursday. I would also include an interview with the coach and ask about his feelings of whether or not Eifert was a very valuable player since he has yet to finish a complete season. I would also include exactly how many injuries he has had in the past.
This week I didn't have any editing to do since the last game was an away game. However, I did help Nicole and Rosie with the script to the best of my ability as well as find highlights for the SMN preview clip.
Friday, September 15, 2017
Sports Package Article
http://www.goal.com/en-us/news/enough-with-the-barcelona-talk-its-time-for-philippe-coutinho-to-/18l62vyqihg7n1tuf26q13fzwt
In this article where they talk about the soccer player Philippe Coutinho and how he was gladly received to the club Liverpool after being denied into Barcelona. The article does a good job explaining that Coutinho, a native Brazilian, had the ambition and skills to play up to the Liverpool level. The crowd cheered him on once they put on the field after substituting Emre Can. The article was able to put information of why Coutinho was a valuable player and how he connected and fit in well with the team.
The article was bad at explaining exactly why Barcelona didn't accept Coutinho in the first place. They could have elaborated more on that part to improve the article as well as get insighgt of how he has helped the club improve and what skills and strategies he has brought to the team. The article could have also interviewed Coutinho and given his opinion on the club and on his relationship with the resto of his teammates.
What I would take from this article is that it gives me the idea to do background research on a team on a specific player. Try to include interviews from other players as well as coaches. If there a specific player that I am writing about, I would want to interview that player as well. I would also include live footage of the player while they are in action. That is what I would do for a sports article.
In this article where they talk about the soccer player Philippe Coutinho and how he was gladly received to the club Liverpool after being denied into Barcelona. The article does a good job explaining that Coutinho, a native Brazilian, had the ambition and skills to play up to the Liverpool level. The crowd cheered him on once they put on the field after substituting Emre Can. The article was able to put information of why Coutinho was a valuable player and how he connected and fit in well with the team.
The article was bad at explaining exactly why Barcelona didn't accept Coutinho in the first place. They could have elaborated more on that part to improve the article as well as get insighgt of how he has helped the club improve and what skills and strategies he has brought to the team. The article could have also interviewed Coutinho and given his opinion on the club and on his relationship with the resto of his teammates.
What I would take from this article is that it gives me the idea to do background research on a team on a specific player. Try to include interviews from other players as well as coaches. If there a specific player that I am writing about, I would want to interview that player as well. I would also include live footage of the player while they are in action. That is what I would do for a sports article.
Thursday, May 25, 2017
Last Junio Final: Presentation
Angie Torres
Hr. 7
Video Production
Hr. 7
Video Production
Video Production Reflection
Growth:
My career in e-Communications started my freshmen year. Freshmen year started off with me not knowing anything at all. Quarters were divided and I went through the process of going through animation, video, web, and graphic design. I knew I wouldn't want anything to do with web and animation as I completely didn't have a clue of what I was doing. However, I did now I wanted to go to video regardless of who the teacher was. Fast forward to sophomore year and I was taking Video Production and Graphic Design. I really disliked graphic design, mainly because I didn't learn anything because the teacher didn't know how to teach and made the students ask google how to do a specific thing. Not the best experience. Video Production continued to grow my interest as I learned more and realized filming was a lot of fun and much more simpler than graphic design. It was fun and the only reason I'm still in e-Comm. Now that my junior year is over, I've learned a lot of things to how to get shots in sports events to how to use the camera and tripod to how to set up for games. I've learned how to edit and make videos cleaner and more professional. I've improved a lot since freshmen year and I'd like to thank you, Mr. Cooper. I'm not sucking up, freshmen year I learned a bit but not that much. Sophomore year you've helped since second semester and I'd like to thank you because when I needed help you didn't tell me to go ask google but instead you actually helped and helped me grow in the field.
Relationships:
Throughout this whole year, I've met some new people. Not a lot, but new peers in this class. Seniors, although I didn't speak with them unless I needed help with scheduling. I've met new juniors but only like 3. I've developed a friendships with them. Not to deep but I got along with all of them and there wasn't any drama. I learned how to cooperate with them and made sure communication was a priority in order to make sure no one was disagreeing with an idea. If they criticized my videos, I felt comfortable with them and make sure not to take it to heart because their critiques were very helpful and helped me improve on my video productions. Their help really helped me grow and I'm happy I got to know them personally and professionally.
Time Management:
This class has really pushed me to make sure I used my time wisely. There were times where I had to stay after school and finish videos and there were times where I had to make 2 videos in the time of 3 days. It was stressful and sometimes I wanted to scream but I made it through. My first video was probably some commercial freshmen year and now my normal pieces are of sports that are 35 seconds. They got better and I improved which I am satisfied about because I am really considering taking video production as a career. It took me about two hours to do each one but as the year went on I became much faster and it has taken me about only one hour.
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