http://www.espn.com/nfl/story/_/id/20785019/back-injury-sideline-cincinnati-bengals-te-tyler-eifert-sunday-game-green-bay-packers
The article did a good job on elaborating why Tyler Eifert didn't play last Thursday and missed a full week of practice because of his back injury. This means they kept up to date with the player's absence. The article also did a good job on informing how many back injuries Eifert has had in the pass and included on why he has missed many games due to his injuries. Eifert has never completed a full season since signing with the Bengals back in 2013 due to ankle/back injuries.
What the article could've done better is that they didn't include Eifert's condition at the moment. It would've been better to get an interview with the coach and if possibly Effort himself. The article was kept short with an informative tone but should've added emotion on whether or not fans were devastated with his absence. The article could've also added pictures of Eifert getting hurt and pictures of him getting hurt in the past.
If I were to do and article over the topic, I would've included pictures of Eifert's past injuries as well as the recent one he has from Last Thursday. I would also include an interview with the coach and ask about his feelings of whether or not Eifert was a very valuable player since he has yet to finish a complete season. I would also include exactly how many injuries he has had in the past.
This week I didn't have any editing to do since the last game was an away game. However, I did help Nicole and Rosie with the script to the best of my ability as well as find highlights for the SMN preview clip.
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